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Monday, 20 June 2016

My EOTC week higilight

              THE Crazy SLIDE!!!
Whoh it was my turn on the slide as I walked I  started to giggling because the cold water was slipping through my legs as I sat down, on the slide  I was looking at the amazing view when I counted 3,2,1" goooooo”.  I felt like screaming “cannon ball!!” I landed in the water with my legs twisted I had to scream ouch! As I slammed In the water my cheeks started to flutter as I floated back to the surface of the water.  
The End.

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  1. Anonymous26 June 2016 at 19:21

    I like your writing that you did.

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    1. Anonymous6 August 2016 at 17:48

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    2. Anonymous6 August 2016 at 17:48

      thank you

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  2. Anonymous5 July 2016 at 15:11

    Kiaora Divya
    I like how you used all those wow word and I liked how you put your punctuation in the right place.
    But can you reread your work because it dose not make sense.
    I went down the slide to and I thought it was crazy too.


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